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she can rip you and fuck you and cut you and bleed you,
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    she can break open your mind to capture your thoughts

    rape your heart of its greatest love

    break up the family, take away honesty,

    trash your apologies

    sack your worst enemy...

    and she will

    :robotfrustrated:Necrotic techno-magic bullshit.:robotfrustrated:COWBOY_STILGAR sed so


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    wives?


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    the_tick_rules2 said:

    wives?

    yeah wives and gutter skank sewer breath sticky s**ts

    :robotfrustrated:Necrotic techno-magic bullshit.:robotfrustrated:COWBOY_STILGAR sed so


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    And she has

    All greatness comes from loss
    Swimeival
    06-10-2004
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  • SwimNinja
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    Someone got dumped.

    Here in Cloud Cuckoo Land, there are no rules: There's no government, no baby sitters, no bedtimes, no frowny faces, no bushy mustaches, and no negativity of any kind. And there's also no consistency.


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    PrincessUnikitty said:

    Someone got dumped.

    no im just reminiscing... take a look at underture up there <.^

    imma go talk to him he needs me real bad... stay here doodette

    :robotfrustrated:Necrotic techno-magic bullshit.:robotfrustrated:COWBOY_STILGAR sed so


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    yo, yo, yo, cheer up my man.

    you are high level tech wizard.

    you dont need sick disgusting w***e(s) like her

    :robotfrustrated:Necrotic techno-magic bullshit.:robotfrustrated:COWBOY_STILGAR sed so


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    Scars will heal soon
    The dregs in us spent the earth down

    Better than drowning in a burlap sack
    I live. As Alice. I die.
    Children shouldn't play with dead things
    Foaming crows
    Tear at their wings
    Sad eyes cry crimson blood

    Drop it it's dead
    Wheels won't turn they won't turn the birdy's head
    Sad eyes sad eyes like sharpened daggers
    You'll never walk only stagger
    Sad eyes quite cryptic


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    CircleOfTheTyrants said:

    Scars will heal soon
    The dregs in us spent the earth down

    Better than drowning in a burlap sack
    I live. As Alice. I die.
    Children shouldn't play with dead things
    Foaming crows
    Tear at their wings
    Sad eyes cry crimson blood

    Drop it it's dead
    Wheels won't turn they won't turn the birdy's head
    Sad eyes sad eyes like sharpened daggers
    You'll never walk only stagger
    Sad eyes quite cryptic

    You'll never walk only stagger

    this line doesnt fit... it ruined your entire poem. by saying that you turned your poem into a threat against someone...

    and no one knew you were going to go down that road. plus that style is lacking cohesion.

    :robotfrustrated:Necrotic techno-magic bullshit.:robotfrustrated:COWBOY_STILGAR sed so


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